Instead of a change of terms I offered a whole new lease. Main reason was for a clean restart? Also it clearly defined that the new lease is a term lease as well which will end in another year. There was probably an easier way to do this, i.e. change of terms notice?
I made this more complicated than necessary. The form on this site, "notice to renew or vacate", would of been perfect but I had a change in terms.
What if I reworded the notice to renew or vacte to notice to sign new lease or vacate? I think that just might work!