Re: why you people keep doing this? - Landlord Forum thread 325066

Re: why you people keep doing this? by Anonymous on September 29, 2014 @15:45

If I were you, I would spend a few dollars on remedial education until you get to the point where you can put together a coherent sentence. "It seems..." To what "it" so you refer? "Why you people still keep doing this..." The meaning of your writing would be clearer if you put the verbs and pronouns in proper order. And try to select a topic and stick to it -- proper introduction of the topic, supporting statements, then a question--if one exists. Meanwhile, keep reading, it will help you.

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